{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"66040788","dateCreated":"1391805622","smartDate":"Feb 7, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tmkailee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66040788"},"dateDigested":1532768500,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"GEneral","description":"Overall you have a good draft that is organized and uses evidence. Two areas for revision:
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\n1. Need an opening paragraph;
\n2. Need to think more about how this ad is supposed to get young boys to use condoms or wait. What will convince them to do that here in the ad? It's still true that they won't get pregnant. So what is it supposed to be saying that will make them change their behavior?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[{"id":"66040766","dateCreated":"1391805526","smartDate":"Feb 7, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tmkailee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66040766"},"dateDigested":1532768499,"commentId":"487116408_1","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: This is your paragraph 2. You need an...","description":"This is your paragraph 2. You need an opening paragraph that introduces the ideas\/topic that the essay will be about. Can't start an essay with "this ad" before we know it's an essay about ads.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"This ad was a part of an ad campaign that was launched in Chicago in 2013 due to the high rate of teen pregnancy in and around Chicago; in fact Chicago has one of the highest teenage pregnancy rates in the country. The ad did its job in that it stirred up a lot of talk and lowered the teen pregnancy rate in Chicago by thirty-three percent. It reaches us emotionally through pathos, targeting teenagers in the Chicago area effectively using an image of a pregnant male.","dateCreated":"1391805527","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Teen+Pregnancy+Ad+Essay\/488027934?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66040768","dateCreated":"1391805527","smartDate":"Feb 7, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tmkailee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66040768"},"dateDigested":1532768500,"commentId":"487116408_2","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: How will this convince the boys to do...","description":"How will this convince the boys to do what the ad wants them to do?","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"ce for this ad includes both males and females from about thirteen to twenty (specifically), but it caught the attention of all ages. When polled about the effectiveness of this ad, residents of the Chicago area found it to be effective in highlighting how girls are looked at by suddenly (yet only momentarily) thrusting the responsibility of carrying a child for nine months upon the males. Thus, a lot of young boys were intrigued by this ad as well, bringing them to think of how they would feel and look carrying around all the weight and evidence of their mistakes. It also shows that even though the boys are not the ones to be pregnant for nine months it can still affect them through sexually transmitted infections.","dateCreated":"1391805527","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Teen+Pregnancy+Ad+Essay\/488027934?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"69921806","body":"The changes are good, but how do you know all this? Who did the poll? That needs to be cited.","dateCreated":"1393189596","smartDate":"Feb 23, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"66040770","dateCreated":"1391805527","smartDate":"Feb 7, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tmkailee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66040770"},"dateDigested":1532768500,"commentId":"487116408_3","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: He doesn't have to deal with unexpect...","description":"He doesn't have to deal with unexpected pregnancy - at least not unless he wants to or is forced to.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"The male has to deal with these things too,","dateCreated":"1391805528","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Teen+Pregnancy+Ad+Essay\/488027934?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66040772","dateCreated":"1391805528","smartDate":"Feb 7, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/tmkailee.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66040772"},"dateDigested":1532768500,"commentId":"487116408_4","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: I'm not clear on how the ad will get ...","description":"I'm not clear on how the ad will get the young males to do what the ad wants them to do.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"just how effective this ad campaign is and can be. This ad could be just as effective when placed just about anywhere because of its interesting portrayal of teen pregnancy and the effects it can have on un-expecting teens.
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\nIn conclusion, this ad series was very effective in capturing the attention of teens in the Chicago area and helping to lower the teen pregnancy rate. It made others more aware of the consequences of un-safe sex and how it not only can lead to an unexpected pregnancy but also sexually transmitted infections effecting both females and males.","dateCreated":"1391805528","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Teen+Pregnancy+Ad+Essay\/488027934?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}